The World Will End With This Song I am the fallen scribe, Picking up the blood tipped pen again, To tell of the winter storms, The apathy to which my empty veins, And crimson wrists will bring, I am the rusty knife, The closet you cannot shut, Fruits of pleasure soaked in pain, The breathe you choke on, She severed me, But you brought me back to life, The fallen angel is me, The river I need is here. ...thoughts please...
Not bad. to me it lacked something to make it stand out and be special, but it was wtill good. On a side note Bullet for my Valentine are awesome and Tears Don't Fall is my favourite song by them.