All I Could Ever Need

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    esaul17

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    My heart would be prettier if it wasn’t broken
    My world clearer without tears in my eyes
    My smile would be wider if there was truth behind it
    My day brighter if you heard my cries

    A faded brightness illuminates me
    A face pale as the moon
    And hair as deep as the darkest night
    Flows around it to consume
    And stars gently sprinkled amongst the void
    Are snowflakes within her hair
    Feeling at home with the chill in her voice
    Unable to fog the surrounding air
    But something still beats beneath this coat of frost
    A heart like any other
    Pumping blood through the coldest of veins
    A warmth she hopes to smother
    The fire and frost mix and mingle
    Forming the tornado that is her soul
    Beautifully unique in perfect instability
    But never mine to unroll
    Solely enthralled with what I cannot have
    Loneliness takes its toll
    A thousand curses to what I cannot be
    And the knowledge I’ll never be whole

    A would do anything to be in your heart
    I’d beg and cry and plead
    Because if you would just be mine
    I’d have all I could ever need
     
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    Linja

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    I'm going to steal a line from Friskey right now.

    NOICE!
     
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    esaul17

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    Thanks lol.
     
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    Friskey™

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    :lol:

    Good job though. ^_^
     
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    Lilian

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    And of course all these poems you write every two days are yours, aren't they? How do you manage to? I've never written a line... Talents here and there! I like most the 20th verse.
     
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    esaul17

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    The 20th verse? What?

    And yes I write everything I post. I would never take credit for another's work.
     
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    Lilian

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    It's the beggining of the contrast of the poem!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Hell...esaul17=god when it comes to lyrics...seriously...this guy comes up with lines I couldn't even dream of coming up with *mini-wave in celebration of esaul17*
     
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    esaul17

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    This poem only has 3 verses though...

    Sorry, I really don't know what you mean.
     
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    a life in ashes

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    I think she means line twenty. nice job by the way, one of your best IMO.
     
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    Lilian

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    Yes, i meant line!:p Sorry...
     
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    esaul17

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    Oh! well that clears some confusion. Sorry lol, never thought of that. I was wondering if "Verse 20" was some termology or somehting. Thanks.
     

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