Dead to Closing Eyes

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Dead to Closing Eyes

    Torn by thoughts,
    Into the fragments of your heart,
    After the bullets have hit their mark,

    Confused,
    I think I'm dead when there's no water,
    Smothering me and still I breathe,

    My life is so unclear,
    Breaking from you,
    But regret is what I fear,

    Mind with no air,
    Heart may leak fire and water,
    Blood will drip from these wounds,
    Pushing glass through skin and choices,

    My life is so unclear,
    Breaking from you,
    But regret is what I fear,
    So I if stay with darkened heart,
    Or sever my only love, Will I be,
    Dying in your arms.
     
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    Darcy

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    I really like it. The first verse is my favorite. It's pretty.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    You're poetic.
     
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    a life in ashes

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    Thanks
     

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