Punk Boy Shaves His Mohawk

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Kate, Apr 26, 2006.

  1. #1
    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2003
    Messages:
    3,414
    Likes Received:
    3



    rude girl overanalyzing
    punk boy's words and actions
    converse, t-shirts, combat boots
    a battle of the bands
    "do you know how to skank?"
    she smiles. she'll dance with him
    it's not a mosh but close enough
    far too long since the last meeting
    a month since the radio station
    since then he shaved off his mohawk
    she wants to run her hands over his hair
    it must be velvet. soft. or so she'd guess
    she'd like to know for herself
    but hands off. remember his girlfriend.
    don't let him get too close.
    has she betrayed herself?
    he doesn't seem to know she has
    a punk rock crush at its worst.
     
  2. #2
    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

    Joined:
    Nov 28, 2004
    Messages:
    12,551
    Likes Received:
    166



    I can't think of any way to describe it, and it's possible that you weren't being serious when you were writing it, but I really, really like this poem.
     
  3. #3
    Kate

    Kate beat me senseless LPA Super Member

    Joined:
    Sep 24, 2003
    Messages:
    3,414
    Likes Received:
    3



    I don't know if I was being serious or not. I tried, but I can't seem to take even my own feelings seriously.
     
  4. #4
    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

    Joined:
    Nov 28, 2004
    Messages:
    12,551
    Likes Received:
    166



    I go to the extremes or don't take anything seriously.

    Which is why I write mostly emo or extremely fluffy things.
     

Share This Page