Fake Answers To Familiar Questions

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    Darcy

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    Yeah, here's another song from me. I welcome questions, comments, critisizm, and anything else you have to say.

    * Rhythm change for chorus. You can ignore it if you want.
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    Fake Answers To Familiar Questions

    So maybe it's true, I'm just a face you'll use
    To justify your self abuse
    But me, I am no angel
    I'm just looking for the best excuse
    And I know it's not the right way to find
    A way to leave this frame of mind
    But right never got me anywhere
    And I just want to get out of here

    *
    So you've been wondering what's wrong
    And we both know I'll never learn
    But this condition caused my habit
    Just be glad that you don't have it
    I never asked to change the past
    But I can't keep from looking back
    At the years through the lens of a martyr
    God, I make things so much harder

    I guess it's true, loss always makes you think
    That someday every ship will sink
    And you'll never be an exception
    No, I'll never learn to accept it
    But if good things come to people who try
    Then how does it work that he got left behind
    Oh my world has been closing all the wrong doors
    So why should I hold on to faith anymore?

    *
    So you've been trying to change my mind
    Whatever helps you sleep at night
    But please forgive my nervous habits
    Must be hard to keep from laughing
    We keep on trying to turn the page
    But we both know I'll never change
    I never said I'd be an example
    Never said I wouldn't repeat my mistakes

    But I can't be the only one around
    Who'd rather put the puzzle down
    Than ask a million questions
    Maybe there is no real message
    But you'll keep trying to find the truth
    You think it's hidden inside of you
    But me, I am no better off
    At least you have a good excuse
    I wish I could use your excuse

    END

    Thanks for reading!
     
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    Testament

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    pretty damn good.
     
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    Darcy

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    Thanks!
     
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    Canadian Joe

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    Ooh. Me likey.

    :thumbsup:
     
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    Friskey™

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    Damn...thats good.
     
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    Darcy

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    Aw, thankyou dearies! :hug:
     
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    Luke

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    I quite like it, well done :)
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's great! truly, madly, deeply love it.
    *what the heck is up with me?*
     
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    Joe

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    Brilliant. Another awesome piece of work from you. I really really love & enjoy reading your work.
     
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    Darcy

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    Oh my goodness, I wasn't expecting this many people to like it.

    Thank you so much!
     
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    Linja

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    Well, what did you expect, Darcy? You do rhyme ridiculously well.
     
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    Darcy

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    Haha, I think my rhyme schemes are too basic.
     
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    Linja

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    Does that mean I'm a bad writer? I can't even write basic because I get distracted by possibilities.

    Psshffaw. They're not too basic.
     
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    Darcy

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    No, you're an awesome writer.

    I just mean that a lot of my rhyming has an A A B B pattern and stuff like that.
     
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    Linja

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    It makes it accessible and purdy, so hush, or you'll get a supersonicbrowniepunch.
     
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    Darcy

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    I don't know...a supersonicbrowniepunch sounds pretty good to me...
     
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    Linja

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    Ohno, you don't want one of those. They smart.
     

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