My imposter: I lie... I lie to you to get a piece of you killed I hide from you to get my feelings stilled Running from the fears that you povoke Screaming with your hands wrapped around my throat The louder I get, the more you tighten your grip The longer I live, the further my blood drips And I wish, I wish I would have lost her Yes, I wish I would've lost you, my imposter I lie... I lie to you so you don't ever tell the truth The truth would hurt just as much as your abuse So I'm jumping off the edge of what we've built Diving into these feelings that have been spilt The deeper I sink, the higher you are above The more I look up, the more you think you're being loved And I wish, I wish I would have lost her Yes, I wish I would've lost you, my imposter And I wish, I wish I would have lost her Yes, I wish I would've lost you, my imposter I lie to you, my imposter I'd die for you (to leave), my imposter hope someone likes it...'cause I'm really feeling these lyrics
Not every line rhymes, but it is a typical AABB rhyme scheme. I liked it though, probably one of your best. Good job. I love the course.
thank you very muche as for the AABB rhyme it's all I ever do....well most of the time I only have 2 or 3 poems/lyrics with some other rhyme type such as ABAB