Help you see (what you've done to me): I'm sitting at my desk in the back of my room Can't seem to shake this depressing gloom Pen to the paper, I'm out of ideas to let off steam No more lyrics to tell the world what I mean I want to let loose and tear you apart I want to hide away and mend my broken heart I want to show you what you've done to me I want to spit words that will help you see... All I want is to get it written, put it down quick, Get it black on white before the feelings slip Jumbled words sorted into rhymes on a page Words and feelings held in until up on a stage I want to let loose and tear you apart I want to hide away and mend my broken heart I want to show you what you've done to me I want to spit words that will help you see... I'll walk away with a triumphent feeling swelling inside Be rid of you and your opinions plastered with lies For the first time the words will come clearly without denial Lock you out and walk on, all alone with a smile I want to let loose and tear you apart I want to hide away and mend my broken heart I want to show you what you've done to me I want to spit words that will help you see... ...what you've done to me
Obviously. No offense, but this isn't that good. It's a little too repetitive. The verses aren't long enough. Also, the chorus doesn't make much sense. You go from wanting to let loose and destroy someone to wanting to hide away in consecutive lines.
Ouch well...apparently we have 2 completely different opinions her (not icluding mine) well...I aggree with the wording not making much sence if you really understand it the way it reads...but you sorrta have to dig the meaning out of this one...maybe it's just sumthing only I get...but still...thanks to both of you for your opinion