No name game

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Seinfeld, Oct 16, 2006.

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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    so..this game should be fun...I'll write 2-4 lines for a poem/lyrics and you just add 2-4 more until everyone aggrees it's done...then we name it and post the finished project :p

    so...here goes nothing:


    I think that love should be a sin
    along with all the pain it's drowning us in
    A never ending line of wrong interpretations
    has made love the fear of all the greater nations



    so...hope y'all enjoy this game...I know I will...(if you don't like what someone has posted you can make a suggestion and that person can edit it if he/she'd like to) :)
     
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    esaul17

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    A carrot of hope to string us along
    Our heart dances to the beat of another's song
    We struggle to be free of her deadly embrace
    As we kiss the lips upon her face
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Those lips, desired yet despised
    torn back and forth by the glare in her eyes
    Once caught, she won't let you go
    She'll make you confuse friend and foe


    (hm...doesn't seem...quite right :p)
     
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    esaul17

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    But soon you come to crave this pain
    A blistering pleasure replacing your old distain
    Who you once were is an echo from long ago
    Collapse into torment as it's all you know
     
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    Seinfeld

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    As all you know exists as what you fear,
    You realize help is anywhere but here
    No hand to hold yours as you're going down,
    No one but yourself to hear your pleading sounds

    (this IS a lot of fun ^_^)
     
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    esaul17

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    Maybe the second line there should be: "You realize help is anywhere but here". It's up to you though...

    Now watch her smile as you sink
    A single tear falls with a blink
    Only she could lift you up so high
    That when dropped you'd be doomed to die
     
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    Seinfeld

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    okay ^_^ liked your's better

    Suffering and all alone between sane and insane
    No way to blend her out of the pictureframe
    The beautiful portrait framed in pure gold,
    Now the material holding memories, so sweet, begins to mold
     

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