What was really there

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    Akidfrompa

    Akidfrompa Well-Known Member

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    Somewhere In the rubble
    Of this holocaust
    Lies the puzzle
    Where you swear
    There are pieces
    Missing.
    Taken away by the animal
    We never had.

    It's always hard to breathe
    When you feel like diving
    Head first
    Into the earth below the canyon side.
    Just to be rated as mediocre
    For your greatest effort.
    But as you requested,
    There will be an encore.

    The awestruck reaction
    To the command, 'jump'
    When it's responded with
    'Only if I won't survive the fall after'.

    The lips that tasted
    Sweet like honey
    Are bitter with spoil
    And the grand plan
    For the white picket
    Perfect ending
    To a miserable life
    Didn't survive the flood
    That washed away
    The house we were never getting
    Or the hope we didn't have for it.

    It seems more and more
    Like the pieces really weren't there
    And maybe that's why
    You just stopped trying
    To create anything
    From the nothing you saw.
     
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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    I liked it. The last verse was amazing. Good job.
     
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    Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    That was amazing.
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Wooow...so...like...wow...awesome...^_^
     

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