Our dreams weigh us down

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    Seinfeld

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    Our dreams weigh us down:

    Unlike the stars above
    we fail to coruscate
    We'd like to be looked up to
    and show everyone the way

    But our colors are just too dull
    buried beneath all this weight
    Our colors are just too dull
    and the distance ahead is far too great

    We won't get anywhere
    if we don't choose to follow
    We'll choke to death on lies
    if we don't choose to swallow

    And our colors are just too dull
    buried beneath all this weight
    Our colors are just to dull
    and the distance ahead is far too great

    Can't you hear us call
    from beneath our bloated dreams?
    Sufficating in our sleep
    our calling soon grows into a scream

    Our dreams weigh us down
    (Dreams weigh us down)
    Our dreams weigh us down
    (Dreams weigh us down)

    Our colors are just too dull
    buried beneath all this weight
    Our colors are just to dull
    and the distance ahead is far too great​
     
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    Agent

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    That's a nice piece. Keep up the good work :)!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you very much
     
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    Arhaz

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    it is absolutely flawless. the flow is...perfect. congrats!
     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you very much ^_^
     
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    El Muerto

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    Yeah, pretty good, nice choice of words.

    I especially liked this part:

     
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    Seinfeld

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    Thank you :)
     

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