Hey guys, me and Louis did some collab lyrics. Let us know what you all think. The Only One She’s a beautiful girl living in her own world Dancing through the summer fields of emerald And with the sun in the sky it brings a tear to my eye Knowing she’s the only one I could never tell a lie to I want nothing more than to just make her mine I would die in peace if she was just by my side Because if love was a crime then I’d be doing time I can’t get the same old dream from out of my mind And it hurts to know that we will never be real I’m addicted to the feelings I’m forbidden to feel Once again I lick my wounds hoping that they’ll heal Shut my thoughts away never again to break the seal It’s like something malevolent has conspired against me ‘Cause she’s all I see in every dream when I fall asleep I'm fed up with hearing I have to move on to feel free Because I know that she’s the only one for me She's something else, something enigmatic Difficult to fathom, something dynamic She's nonpareil, nowhere near the same Beyond any sort of euphoria I could ever attain Like a star in the night sky, shining in the black I'd give everything just to have it in my grasp But it won't go away, the want, the despondency If only I knew what she wanted from me But see, there seems to be no way to get past it I want to put it all away, to the grave, in the casket But it remains the same as the sun sets Shut myself away, never to be seen again It’s like something malevolent has conspired against me ‘Cause she’s all I see in every dream when I fall asleep I'm fed up with hearing I have to move on to feel free Because I know that she’s the only one for me Over and over I'm caught in the flash again Over and over I feel worthless in this clash again Constantly coming up short and constantly being broken down Shoved away by my own feelings, held back and pushed around Sometimes you just wonder 'is it just me?' Or is it some dark force doubting my right to be? Is this insanity? It obsesses and echoes through my head I just want it all to pass like the design of life and death I’m told time plays a role of washing things away Building bridges over problems you’re outspoken to say So I Look to the skies again, standing alone where I am Hoping I can move on but wondering if I can Well I don't know what to tell you, all I know is She's the only damn thing pulling me through this Don't feed me with your 'more fish in the sea' She's the only one I want, the only one for me It’s like something malevolent has conspired against me ‘Cause she’s all I see in every dream when I fall asleep I'm fed up with hearing I have to move on to feel free Because I know that she’s the only one for me
That's awesome guys. I really like it. The language used is awesome and there's an awesome flow to it (well, how I read it to myself anyway). You've outdone yourselves
The first verse is Luke's. The chorus is Luke's with the exception of the third line, which I wrote. I wrote the second verse. The first 6 lines of the third verse are mine, and the next four lines after that are Luke's, and the last two lines are mine, but Luke made a minor revision in there. The original last two lines of the third verse were, "Looking to the skies again, standing where I am // Wondering if I could, wondering if I can" and were originally placed at the beginning of a rough verse I sent to Luke. After he made some revisions, the third verse ended up being his and my rough verses combined into one. The next four lines in the next separate stanza are mine. And like I said, the chorus is all Luke with the exception of the third line.