Hey guys! Would you read my book that I'm writing?

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    Gloomy Mushroom

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    The Third World War was brutal.
    Millions of American men lost their lives fighting in Asia and in Europe.
    But the superpower that rose after the Third World War has now done more damage to each individual than anyone could picture Utopia to be framed as.
    Welcome to the future.
    Los Angeles is now the City of Fallen Angels instead of the City of Angels.
    Halos choke the city instead of glamourising the horizons.
    Darkness is the new light.
    Lies are the new oxygen.
    Greenhouse gases have been replaced with neon billboards while freedom and individualism have been replaced with suppression and conformity. A global corporation now controls minds with propaganda and drugs, doused with deceit and hypocrisy.
    Now a group of people, who are hated by society for what they believe in, must rise against the global corporation to try and gain a better world order. Lives will be lost and hearts will shed more blood, as the fight for the Old World begins.
     
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    The Doctor

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    Oooooo I love futuristic, post-apocalyptic stuff like this, I'd read it!
     
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    I can give you an extract outta the first chapter/a link to the developing story if you want.Or maybe I should post it on here?
     
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    post the story here! I'd love to read it. and this stuff sounds good....haven't read some good stuff in a lot of time now.....;)
     

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