Me as I

I thought I might post this - it's something I had to do one day for class, present a magazine cover named Me as I. The teacher hated it though but meh.

 

Hi !
it looks cool, but i don't think it will works for MAGAZINE cover, thats why your teacher refuse the idea !
MAGAZINE cover should contains, shiny colors, that maybe atractive to the humain eyes .
yours it may work if you change the moon background with something else sweet and feminine !
Wish you all the best in you life ... keep working !

 

I'm going with SeeMO in that it doesn't look like a magazine cover, it looks more like a poster. It needs more going on, like more of a eye-catching title, some more images, wider range of color etc etc.

This was a magazine I had to do for class, however it was a double page spread article, this was the rough draft, I'll have a look for my finished copy.

 

Looks more like a book cover to me.

 

Magazines tend to have the text cover more of the page. It's an interesting picture though.

 

I know but that was the base of it, when I had shown it to the teacher I hadn't thought of any more text I could put in but it was just before the due date, I submitted something else a bit more colourful but I can't find it now.

 

Its very pretty Sarah, I like the transparency of the veil in the background.