i just ate pizza. and it was for free cause my uncle owns the shop. OHHHH YERRRR
easier to run, Replacing this pain with something numb lp easier to run
Thanks alot. all your posts make a great contibution to my confidence as a writer. I just want to say that we need more people to come and vist...
Pretty good. i feel that it needs one more verse to close it up but this is just my opinion. This line ROCKS man. i love it. a good job. KEEP...
Nice one. it was short but i didnt need to be any longer as you said what needed to be said. I LIKED IT. i especially liked the 2nd verse. keep it up.
Just drop the whole thing, niether of you post in this again. and everything will be fine. Don't worry. ahamLp made an honest mistake. There is...
I like the splinter cell games. but then i am a pacient person. i like the use of sneaking around and not going on a wild killing rampage. but one...
the horse with turtal feet. Would you rather that lp stopped playin music. or they release a new album which absolutely sucks. Like really bad....
Totally agreed
B) Nice, especially for 3 minutes. Remember that you dont have ot rhyme because it can make the poem feel forced. but im still stuck in the...
Devil out of the poem shall be done, i could see it was becoming over used, it's just my poems always seem to lead to how the devil seems to...
Everything has to end You’ll soon find that we’re out of time left to watch in all unwind lp P5hng Me A*wy
LOL agreed
i dont get whats wierd about it, mabye some description of it would help
EAT Would you rather LPA forums to close down or to be banned from the forums
ok, here we are guys with my new work, im goin a bit more free form here, though there is some rhyming, hope you like it. Don't forget. don't be...
olo NOOOO forgetting. HOWZ TOZ NOTZ SPELLZ STUFF LIKES A NOOB1111!!!!!!!!!!!one!!!!one111111
yer i realised that thats y i edited my post, lol, im smart
umm u dont like the use of third person
To keep your name i shall bravely donate my shadow. and i expect nothing in return, how generous is that. (donation involves a...