To The Departed

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    Luke

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    To The Departed

    The breaking news, it fills my heart with sorrow
    We can only hope for a better tomorrow
    Lives wasted, families torn apart
    And I fear that this is only the start of it all

    I wish I could reach out to them
    I wish I could rewrite the past
    So I could see smiles instead of tears
    I wish I could stop this chaos
    I wish I could change it all
    So we can live in a world without fear

    This is to the departed
    To all who we’ve lost
    I can only pray your departures
    Open blind eyes to the rot
    Our society is falling
    Utopia was never further away
    For our children to have a future
    We must correct the errors of today

    Another’s lost to a gun, one hasn’t been found yet
    Little sister’s wondering why her mother’s so upset
    In time, I pray you realise
    How many hearts you’ve broken
    (it never had to be this way)

    I wish I could reach out to them
    I wish I could rewrite the past
    So I could see smiles instead of tears
    I wish I could stop this chaos
    I wish I could change it all
    So we can live in a world without fear

    This is to the departed
    To all who we’ve lost
    I can only pray your departures
    Open blind eyes to the rot
    Our society is falling
    Utopia was never further away
    For our children to have a future
    We must correct the errors of today

    This street never saw a crime
    This person didn’t have to die this way
    This funeral never had to be arranged
    This family never had to feel this way

    This weapon never had to be purchased
    This life wasn’t given for this purpose
    This note never had to say we miss you
    This song never had to have existed

    This is to the departed
    To all who we’ve lost
    I can only pray your departures
    Open blind eyes to the rot
    Our society is falling
    Utopia was never further away
    For our children to have a future
    We must correct the errors of today
     
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    Jordan

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    I think it's awesome. Sort of a war theme i guess? I really like your writing style.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks very much. :)

    I think you'll find that in my lyrics I try to encorporate the necessary language and technique so that what I'm writing about can be interpreted in several different ways. In this piece my main focus was the rising amount of teenage killings there have been recently in the UK and how it's effected everyone including myself, however it could certainly be interpreted as a war theme song or possibly even suicide.

    Thanks for the feedback. :)
     
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    Jordan

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    I guess i don't follow much over in the UK so I wouldn't really know, but i do agree that it could be interpreted in many ways.
     

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