I never figured out how to do that ????
I didn't really like the start of this poem, same with the other verse of the same length, i didn't really like the repetitiveness. The whole...
How long until you get over the fact you PWN3D him :lol: And the gorillaz guy is cool, nice work freakolp
I don't think you could have done better, it has a certain feel to it that is part of the poem, everyone could take it and make it seem better in...
There were some bits where it didn't flow, also it rhymed to much for my liking, it seemed to become forced in some places. This line makes no...
A subliminal message, maybe? RIDE THE BUFFA-*gets mobbed by LPAers* [/b] ah... the good old days of ride the buffalo, back when i was a newbie....
But if he could see, he would be able to see the world is revolving around him, cause in the picture, it is, literally. :chemist: Anyway, i...
My World I feel a chilly breeze on my neck, As I’m walking down the street. All I want is for someone to be here, Someone to be with me. It...
Entry 13. Wow, the entries are really diverse so far. Hope more people start voting. Remeber, try to put a link to this page in your sig :D
i felt there was some loss of rhytm at the end but this poem has seemed to evolved lyricly. It has a bit more depth to it than previous poems and...
A sandwitch (I feel so poor) :( :lol: