Well the nano is definently the niced appearence wise, though if your not interested in that at all the rio seems the best. Sturdy player with a...
Just beautiful............................ It started off a bit shakey, i wasn't really getting into it, but from the start of the plane bit i...
I felt that you used the word sad too often. Some variation in words that still ment sad would have been more appealing in my opinion. The whole...
Lol, i havn't had time to read it for a long while, but now i have. ................ This is f*ckin brilliant, cheers to Hellflame. Great work,...
I liked it, though it wasn't as moving as some of your other work. The repeating of the one verse but changing it slightly each time worked well,...
I was being sarcastic, though it's a bit hard to tell in a forum post........ lol. Anyway, i think we should be getting more on topic...........
You had a great idea going but the whole thing seemed far too forced. Keep trying. Writers block really sucks, hope you get over it soon.
Yer i agree, i couldn't find a clear centre to this piece. It also felt a bit forced in some places. I don't know what to say about this poem,...
Well thanks for giving us clues towards which is yours <_<
You can write "old fashion", there is no restriction to the form of the poem/lyrics. The poem can also be about anything, no specific topic....
I have to agree. This was really good. Just awsome. It definently shows that alot of work went into this.
Pretty good, i couldn't quite catch the tune of it though. The only line that i didn't like was "a night in mid October." It just seemed really...
I don't want to make you feel guilty, lol. I'm just saying, it could almost turn out the way the last one did which is what you were trying to...
I still think to save you money, it is fairer my way. It may seem unfair that entry 4 would get bumped down but there where still 3 poets better...
Well i havn't been here in quite a while, nice to see that a new comp is running. Hmmm, i have a few unfinished works, i'll have to get cracking...
I really liked it too. Very emotional and it seemed like much thought went into it. Like always, this was wonderful.
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Now that is pure genious.....