Totally awsome, that's all i have to say.
I agree with what other people have said, it's good, and would probably make a great song, but it isn't anything that is super original and...
One of the longest i've read by you but totally amazing. Just great, really powerful, i loved it.
That was fukin halerious..... :lol: :lol: :lol:
Alot of people may find this poem strange, as it seems very disjointed. Fire burns, All our throats, While cold chills, Every heart. Confusion...
I liked how it was compatred to boxing your girl..... :whistle: :lol: Awsome write, It flowed really well and...
That was fricken awsome, i totally loved it. I love a dark poem and this was perfection, amazing job.
Yeah. She makes me horny. Who is it? [/b] I agree, anyway, that was awsome, couldn't stop laughing yet at the same time, if you looked for it,...
Awsome, totally amazing, your alwasy suprising me with your talent Arhaz, you think i'd expect it by now, but it's always so good, great job.
It was simple but it sounded good, nice job.
I really loved this, it was awsome....... ;) Just brilliant.
Pretty good ;) I can definently say you are getting better the more you write. It flowed fairly well and despite it's reltave shortness it...
What programs will isolate the music seperate from a video file and be able to save it as an audio format. Any help apriciated.
Well it sounds right in my head....... meh. Anyway, thanks for all the comments people, i might be able to write ome more poem before my holidays...
Sad to see you leave Dusan :( What a great piece to leave on, very touching, great job and have fun. :wave: :(
I felt it flowed so well there it didn't need to rhyme. Mabye it doesn't :mellow:
Alsmost everyone is so focused on finding the reason for things. The world could just be completely random, therefore looking for an explination...
Guilt and Innocence (Weakness and power, despair and choice) I don’t want to be innocent, A being so pure and free, Who does not live life with...
I don't think this poem was focused enough. It just seemed to be missing that link to a common theme, that's what i thought.
Sorry Dusan, but i didn't really like this, you've written so much better than this. I know you can do better.