concidering when you wrote it, it's quite good, still like to see something new by you though :D
Sorry but it's just to random and pointless for me to really like. Not saying it's bad, i can't appriciate rap like this.
I really liked this, but i don't think it's your best, you've written so many totally amazing things, that's it hard to remain at that level...
WOW, really powerful, A beautiful piece of writting.
Great job, (I'm pretty sure you can't edit a title.)
It was pretty good, i felt it could have been ended better though.
Lol, great work Arhaz, i really liked it.
That was really emotional, great work.
I really liked it :) I thought it was very good, your defninently getting over your writers block, nice work.
Lol, i know, everyone seems to have written them under strenuous conditions. LOL i wrote mine the day before the competition between midnight and...
They're pretty good, basic, but effective, concidering your just learning, what program are you using??? (I would put the first one in a...
:blink: I don't get it.................... But it's still friggin awsome :lol:
I believe this to be your best so far. Though not quite my style it was quite good, again not fantastic but very good. ^_^
Lyrically this is much better than previous attempts though it felt to shallow for me, the third verse was quite good, but overall, i didn't find...
I think you are starting to get over your writers block, that's one of your longest poems. The only thing is your trying to rhyme to hard, and it...
Ether's right, if you have to sit down and really think about what your going to have to write, line for line, it won't work, you need to free the...
I also liked it, it ran quite smooth though i too found it a bit too short.
How many have you read..... :mellow: Anyway, i didn't love it, but it was quite funny to read a poem about porno magazines, and it was written...
LOL, great job Trans........ your a very talented writer and i feel worthly loosing to a poet as great as you. Congraduations to everyone who...
OK, i don't care if we're allowed to any more, my poem was 11. Glad people liked it. Thanks to everyone who voted for me. And for those who...