Than was my indiscrete way of you casually revealing what poem was yours. Now you ruined your chance.
What i heard
Run, freako, run!!! :lol: [/b] :lol: By the way, what entry was yours freako.................
I found the "It’s not because" too repetative and took away from the poem a bit. It's not your best but it's pretty good and i love the comment...
Does pure water flow diferently to normal water? :mellow:
:blink: I don't even want to know how you can do that.
The shadow one rocks, it's simple, yet the meaning goes so deep, just awsome.
Better than your last, but again, some forced rhyming brings you down. You either need to rhyme less, or really go over your lines when they...
Except me :mellow: :wth: :whistle: :lol: Great work, simple but it flowed well and sounded good. Some forced rhyming in some...
It could have been good, but the poem felt very confused and a bit everywhere, a more organized re-write could turn this into a great poem, at the...
I'm think entry 9 is feakolp......... but i wonder who wrote 11 :hmm:
Thanks feakolp, i'm glad you like it ^_^
Definently not your best, it felt very forced, i know you can do much better.
Really good like alwasy, awsome work sickcycle. ;)
I really really liked this, the concept was brilliant and it was written very well. Only some forced rhyming brought it down. You don't always...
I must agree, it is very differnet to what you often and how you often write but it's really good, I definately think it's one of your best. Great...
Well it's 9 all now :o What fierce competition. :lol: Well i've been thinking about it for a day now, and i really can't choose :( how much...
At the start is seemed very everywhere and i'm like WTF :blink: . But it all tied in very nicely at the end, i really liked it because i couldn't...
I think this is the best of the few so far, i really liked the message and it was written as if you had experienced it, it flowed well and the...
I liked it in a strange way, it had a good if not many true messages in it, the only thing that i felt was missing is a conclusion, it felt as if...