oh yes! i remember that one very clearly *feeling mega old* tetris was so damm adictive!
i like the new style in this one. it's different and more orginal. being orginal is what is hard about writing and if you can over come this as...
i like where you are going with this but i believe it could do with some more work. maybe some more in the chorus? i believe if this is worked...
i have to agree with everyone else...this was really good! post more please! ;)
I think it depends on your definition of complex then. :) [/b] mmm....so your saying that you are simple minded?
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human beings, simple minded? really? for someone who studies human psychology i can safely say that human's are extremly complex creatures....
i acually really like this! it's simple but it flows really well! well done! ;)
yeah, i would have to agree with david. i like it but it's not your best, although i like the concept that you have used. i really like the flow...
don't worry torn rose! i didn't take it as being an insult. so no need for the apology. ;) and david, thanks for the comments. glad you liked it!
thanks all again for the positive feedback. this poem has a more gothic feel to it and i think i may try to write some more stuff of this nature.
thanks all for the comments! ^_^ i like to be able to write poems of all different lengths and i like how a shorter poem can be like a short,...
another good one torn rose! me likey alot! did i post a comment on this before? i know i'v read it before but i can't remember if i replied to...
i felt that the style of this one was quite original. i liked it! it's good to see you back torn rose. can't wait to read more of your stuff! ;)
i thought your song wasn't that bad but there is room for improvement. thats not a bad thing. i mean we all have to start somewhere. the fact...
one word...beautiful this was really, really thoughtful of you. when reading it, i had tears in my eyes... this piece is wonderful and i hope it...
i have to eco lpsk8er's reply...wow! i think i would have to say that this is surly your best one so far. it's flow was really smooth and the...
this one isn't my fav from you but i agree that it is an intersting and somewhat different concept. i do like these lines though. ^_^
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