uh huh! since i have been reading your poems, don't think there has been anything i have disliked! keep at it! ;)
i am for legalisation but i think that it should be controlled up to a point. like we have pubs for drinking in, we should have the same idea for...
oh. my. god.!!! this is so powerful! what the hell are you on when you write this stuff? (or should i not ask that! :shifty: ) this is amazing...
i really like it! very clever cause i could imagine what you are trying to get across and the message that you are conveying is very clear. well...
thankyou freakolp! so glad you liked it and thanks for visiting my thread! :D
i reallylike this one! the repetion in this one was real nice and it provided a fantastic flow to it. this looks like you have put alot of...
yeah, i agree with lpsk8er. i think it has a great essence to it but with just a little more work, it would be really great. as it is, though,...
yeah, i think you have done well in this even though you say your english is not that good. give your self a pat on the back! anymore to share?
this one was really really good! very good descriptives in this one. i love the whole thing! well done! ;)
why do you say that? i can't speak for anyone else but i haven't been here long and i think this is the first time i have seen you post. so hello...
research project for my degree :( then sleep lots!
actually, i don't cut either but i have came so close on many occassion. this is how i thought it would be like if i did take it one more step...
that sounds so sad...poor you. is there anyone you can talk to? i think you need loads of big hugs :hugz:
certainly, my friend. let me introduce myself...my name is jenny (well jennifer but my friends call me jenny!) :D
yeah, i think that would be a great punishment!
incest- creepy at the best of times but killing them too! what the fuck is this world coming too!
that's pretty damm sick. to molest one child is awlful and deserves the death penalty! but all those children...sick, just sick! :angry:
this one does show some good creativity! i really like this one. it makes you think between the lines. always a good sign to to great poem!...
yeah, i have to agree with david on this one! it's really good. very simple but that's the greatness of it! :lol: well done! have you anymore...
oooh, i really like this one, in fact, i love it! it flowed really nicely and i loved this contraction in this line... great thinking behind...