I do karate now for.....um......mabye 6 years. I'm so close to a black belt. I really like karate now more than i did when i was younger because i...
short and sweet, nice work B)
I'd have to agree there but i still liked it. Keep it up.
Great work, i really like the form of it, different from the four line verses you were doing before, i like the concept but i think you could work...
I read it and i was like "WTF" is this, It's great! :lol: I don't know what you where smoking when you came up with it but i like it. It is...
I agree, a great piece of writting, very imaginative and original but i think the flow has to be worked on a bit more. I really like it, hope to...
I have to agree on that one, nevertheless you did good. [/b] I must also agree, great lyrics, love it but i think there has to be two verses...
Intence stuff. I really like it, i'm glad you decided to extend on Seven Years and Peace Treaties and I like the new title better. I must say...