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    The Forgotten History of the Earth - The Four

    Thanks torn rose for that, And i know it's not my best piece poetry wise, i really want to smooth it out a bit more, but when i finished it, i...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Her Eyes.

    Awsome work, definently one of your best ;) , great stuff.
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    The Most Beautiful song you ever heard?

    Fiddle And The Drum - A Perfect Circle There is something I just love about the song, something i find beautiful in it.
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Other Music
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    My Girlfriend Dumped Me Because I Talk Too Much

    LOL :lol:
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    The Forgotten History of the Earth - The Four

    Thanks saunderitos ;)
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    My Girlfriend Dumped Me Because I Talk Too Much

    Awsome you pollished it off beautifully, great job. ;) This verse truned out great: Awsome write ;)
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Apart

    It's great, but i've read some of your better stuff, and it just has that slight underlying forced feeling, i hate writters block, the best you...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Refusal

    Nice work, really liked it, be great to hear it to music, my only concern is the verses could be a bit short, but it depends on the speed of the...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 30, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    The Forgotten History of the Earth - The Four

    Yer i realise this, but it was 12:30 at night, and i was trying to finish it, i'll try to smooth it out a bit more when i get time. Oh and sorry...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 29, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    The Forgotten History of the Earth - The Four

    Well this is an interesting one, telling a storey, which i don't think i've really done before, anyway it is pretty free form, though it rhymes in...
    Thread by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 29, 2005, 10 replies, in forum: Your Projects
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    Working title: Regret

    Yer, the rhyming is a little forced, it gives a somewhat robotic feel, distancing the reader from the poem rather than inviting them into it. I...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 29, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Emotional Song

    Sorry to say, not your best, i couldn't really get into it but it seems to fit more of a song then just a poem, though it doesn't fit your...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 29, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Maple Leaves Have Nothing To Do With This Story

    :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :chemist: :unsure:...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 27, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Why isn't life perfect?

    wow, i don't think i even visulised half that stuff :chemist: , lol :lol: . Thanks freakolp, your pretty good too. ^_^ I apriciate your...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 27, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    the greater invention

    Yes, you can.... :mellow: [/b] What else are you suppose to do with a bag? :chemist:
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 27, 2005 in forum: Random Chat
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    Why isn't life perfect?

    Thanks all three of you, i don't expect you to like everything i write so i don't really care if you don't like it. I've had so much on my mind to...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 25, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Why isn't life perfect?

    Sorry i havn't written anything in so long, no time. But anyway. This poem isn't totally original, a friend came to me with a half started poem...
    Thread by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 25, 2005, 7 replies, in forum: Your Projects
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    Rigor Mortis **taboo**

    Well it's been a while since i've read something from you and you have improved a lot, great job, torn rosed mentioned it wasn't as taboo as your...
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 25, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Mindless games.

    4 lines that all rhyme could be catastrophic, especially when the rhyming becomes forced, but you pulled it off supurbly. Awsome poem.
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 25, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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    Need

    I agree, great job :D
    Post by: D_A_V_I_D, Aug 25, 2005 in forum: Your Projects
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