WOW! I loved it, absolutely amazing. I don't know what it is about it exactly that just gives it such flow and a great level of intecity. For me,...
I agree, youv'e developed your own style, with not always the most conventionaly rhyme patters. great job. Loved the poem, I thought the death...
Nice to see you back here, and you sure like to enter with a *BANG*. Great poem, loved it, great job.
The first one was good, the short middle ones were all right but the last one was weird. It was like 2 different poems. You had the first when you...
I don't really think it needs a chorus, often you write your poems in one big block and it adds to your style. I really love this. Full of imagery...
i agree, i'm running out of things to say aswell, so i'll just stick with AMAZING. I love how you take something simple suck as curtains use it to...
all going well till it wanted me to enter the I.P. adress of my router into the interent browser. It says it should usually be 192.168.1.1 but...
Well aparantly, when i test every single port i've checked (and i've checked quite a few) has a nat error. Now i have been doing some research...
Really, i thought the forums seemed better the last two months. JOKING :lol: Welcome Back.
Thanks, i'm sure you can become great too with practice, i would really recommend reading some other poems by other poets, we really do have some...
Thanks freakolp and arT saveS. There is something about this poem that i really like for some reason. Every time i read it, it brings a tear to...
It was O.K. pretty good for a first try. You seemed to loose focus though, or more, the poem really never develpoed a main focus. Some lines felt...
I must say i really, really, really enjoyed this poem, really beautiful. I think it's one of your best, ;) Once again, a great job.
I agree, this is much better, really great and the last half, especially the last two lines were just amazing. I see alot of potential, KEEP...
I must agree, truely brilliant, your just an amazing writer. Another brilliant piece of work, keep it up.
I only felt the last line inturrupted the flow of the poem but other than that it was AWSOME.... Just another great write, i like the idea behind...
i was watching it and i couldn't hear da music properly so i lean over to turn my sound right up and what happens, i then get the shit scared out...
Thanks souderitos and thanks SD. I havn't forgoten that i owe you a free copy, :lol: Thankyou everyone for your feedback glad people seem to...
It wasn't crap at all, by god that was pretty awsome for your first attempt at writing, i think you could have potential. There was only the odd...
Thanks fallenangel, i asked another friend what they thought of it and they said it was quite twisted aswell. Glad you liked it, hope everyone...