see, this was the orginal part of it that i thought of. But then i keep getting writters block and i can't make a poem out of it like i use to. It...
First line = 3 days grace - home But other than that, this is amazing. Great work. Something i think people can identify with. Keep it up.
Thanks.
Well i believe this is better than my last but i've still got some writters block. Not as bad as when i last wrote but enough to restrict my...
Game to Movie = bad idea At least most of the time. i mean, the movie will be ok, special effects and stuff will be good probly but a game is...
Again different how you were writting before but i like this one. Felt more flowing less forced. Again not one of my favourites sorry to say but...
Emotional stuff. I think this is one of my favourites of all time. It is so good. i mean damn, the day i can write that good is the day i'll be...
Wow, it feels like how you write now but less developped. it's nice. hope you write something new soon.
hmmmmm. personally i don't like this one as much. I don't like the same word in the two line thing but that is just personal preference. You are...
Not bad. I might get their album when it comes out. It reminds me of simple plan crossed with blink 182 and nickelback for some reason.
Nice work, not your best, it felt to forced, i don't think it was something as you said "have enough knowledge about" as you have never had them...
hen you do that you somethimes come out witht he best result. ;)
WOW :hypno: That was amazing. AWSOME work. I really like the rhythm and feel of the song and the rhyming pattern was awsome. i loved it I love...
that's what i think too. It's really good. Keep it up ;)
Nice work, i believe this is the first of your stuff i've read, and it's quite good. Keep it up.
Your reverse phycology won't work on me :shifty:
Thanks ;)
Is the car mine? if it is. i would sit in my cool car B) Would you rather be a cool or smart
Ok. I could never be bothard doing a newbie thing here. I came here at first just to show some of my first writing off but i came to find a great...
I see it. I mean the chanes of something like that are minimal. and i can see it quite well. it isn't as if it is very, extremely vague but i...