Ok here is something new I havn't had much time to write and i havn't had much time to refine this one but i'm afraid i won't get time for a...
u can edit your previous post you know. or any of your posts for that matter. Put the edit button to good use.
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i didn't really like the feel and flow of the chorus section. But these i really liked Totally awsome stuff. Keep writitng.
I'm sorry to say that although this is an awsme poem there was something about it that i didn't like as much as the other poems. It's still really...
As i said, each one getting better. At this rate only :huh: U should reach perfection in :huh: 32 days :P :D Great work.
So I'm taking it as this one gets your "wow" factor? I have reached my goal. :P Thank you. :) [/b] LOL :P It sure does. Great work
Yer, this is the sort of poem/song lyrics that you deffinently need music cause if the music is crap and the lyrics don't have a deep meaning it...
Yer it hard, I mean when you look at science there is no way you can ignore it. But then once upon a time people thought religous explanations for...
NIce. you have great tallent. I have nothing else to say. Great work. Keep it up. Just totally awsome.
NIce, really nice. SOme poems are ment to be short and although this is really great i feel that it could be better if it was a bit longer. Keep...
Nice job. Every one i've read in the last day or so has just been getting better. Keep writting. This one was totally awsome just great. Good work.
Pretty good poem but i agree it is not one of your best since you just wipped it up in a few minutes. More descripiton is needed. Also sorry to...
Another awsome poem, keep it up, can't wait to see what you add. I'm sure it will be just as good as the start. Great work, can't wait to see...
Absolutely brilliant, great job, awsome poem, keep up the great work. This is just great and i must agree with bleeding rose that part is totally...
Absolutely AWSOME, great poem, havn't seen much of your stuff in a while, i only didn't likek the line it didn't seem to fit to me and it felt...
Nice work, rhyming not forced, nice flow and a powerful message, good stuff. i liked this much better than crossroads. but this is just my...
Nice, really liked this poem and the way it was written, i like the style that you have, keep up the great work.
great work. it had a nice flow, although i can't say it toucned me or i felt an extremely strong sense of power from it but neverless, a good poem/