I'd leave it exactly the way it is. I honestly cannot think of any way to improve it.
With You or Points of Authority would be great beginners for the album. But I think Papercut assumes that role perfectly fine.
Bill Campbell
:lol: In some scary way that actually makes sense! Well, I can't come up with a better explanation. ^_^
I can understand him very easily...he screams because he can, and he can do it very well...
Yeah, that's an awesome song. I love Grey Daze's stuff.
Jennifer Lopez
Jack Nicholson
Danny DeVito
Catch Me If You Can
I know. I watched it for the sixth time yesterday. :)
:o That's amazing! Way to go LP, you kicked some serious ass. ^_^
Hilarious! :lol: He's great, I could read his stuff for hours.
The Matrix and The Matrix Reloaded were both great. Queen of the Damned was good too. I also liked hearing the LOTR soundtracks.
Highlight Today: Nothing. Lowlight Yesterday: Not being with him.
Apocalypse Now
Nice job. Keep writing and you'll get even better! :) 8/10
That is so cool! I love short poems, I think it's awesome the way it is. 9.5/10 :D
Welcome back. :)
I love that one, it's awesome! Great job. :D