Love it. Don't know what it is but i love the way your write. Great work, Keep it up! :D
One word, NICE
Yer, it was pretty good, i think you could become great if you wrote more, keep writting.
i was just wondering who or what they are reffering to in this song. Like when they say "why i stay when you just push away" Are they reffering...
Another outstanding poem, i love your work and your style of writing but i have one thing to say. I think you need to move on to another topic...
Pretty good, i can't tell what it would sound like as a song so i'm sure it sounds better when it is sung to a tune, otherwise pretty good job....
i agree that it would be better with at least one more verse but that is my opinion. But the whole third person thing i thought you pulled off...
Nice, not your best, but your best is a very high standard, so don't be dissapointed, it is still good but there are only 2 stroung versers (the...
So powerful and so true. Nice work I love your style of writting. this was a totally awsome poem. Keep up the outstanding work. :D
Thanks, all of you. i appriciate your comments as this was different for me. i'm glad to know that it is still good. :rolleyes:
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Where is the question? Would you rather be that guy above me, or that other guy who isn't the guy above me.
Why i stay when you just push away P5hin me A*wy (hope i spelt it right)
LOL, i don't think i can be much help. I don't know how i feel about it. I don't get a feeling of raw emotion but that is because you are not...
i personally can't wait. But what if it's bad. That would really suck, but i'm sure mike will pull through with some amazing work. 14 tracks...
I think thats about it. Nice fishies allways last = Nice guys (people) always finish last
Nice. we've had a lot of tragic poems lately involving suicide and death. and this one defenetly lives up to some of the other great poems that...
Nice work, fairly short but still extemely powerful. or mabye smller font makes it look short. anyway great work. Keep writing.
Yer. it's nice, couple of lines i feel that could be better though but on the whole it looks like a pretty good song. Here are the lines i think...
WOW :o Amazing work, just totally and utterly amazing. And i am also glad you changed the line 'her brain has turned to mush'. That was the...
i love :lol: