Yer nice, it's good and sounds like it could be great, can't wait to see the rest. Keep it up.
Yer another great topic. i personally liked your last one better, but this one is still Amazing. Nothing to really pic up on. GREAT WORK
THANKS :D
WOW, This is a subject i feel very strongly on and you have writtin a great poem. This is amazing, some of the best work to me i've seen in a...
hey nice, i felt the first few lines didn't flow to well but after that it all went nicely, great job, i like your style of writting. Great Work. ;)
Hey guys, has been a while since i've writtin anything, had to go back to school :( . Anyway here is a rhyming poem, well it rhymes most of the...
Nice, good work the both of you except the double topic on the same thing is very annoying, keep up the good work.
Nice. Mabye not many people apriciate remixes around here im not sure, no one has posted one in a while but i think they are great. it is some of...
another great one, although seems familiare *cough* points of authority *cough* *cough*. LOL. anyway, other than that it is quite good. the...
AMAZING, this has left me speachless........... So much raw emotion is shown through this and then just explodes in the second last verse, this is...
Nice stuff, your best one yet, you are getting better all the time, this one was really powerful and i really liked it. Keep up the great work.
I'm telling you, YOU are an AMAZING writer, i would really love to hear this stuff played. It is amazing. Just keep writing, great song. LOVED IT,...
yer, great one, keep writting. this is good. i really like it. hope it helped your friend ;)
Good poem. I think you are getting better all the time. You write from your heart and thats what makes you good. you also seem to write about...
(this is the would you rahter game so you are spose to start with that but oh well) it's the next page!!!!!!! Would you rather be on this page or...
better but still not fantastic. I just feel the lines are too short and there isn't enough rhythm. Keep writting though. It aint terrible either....
I'm not sure how i feel about this. It is powerful and i fell that but for some reason it just doesn't have that 'WOW' factor for me. It is hard...
Totally amazing. I dont know about others but i liked the blunt outforward feel of the verse and the sort of same in the chorus but that sort of...
thaks jester :teehee: (have to add the face lol) as you can see it is hard to think of a name for this poem. and allthough your names are great,...
yer, if that happened to you in some way be prepared for the police to rock up any second. LOL :lol: Anyway back on point i think the title...