i know that not all poems have to be forced when they rhyme but biggeners who rhyme seem to do this often. This is a great poem and it didnt feel...
Yer great stuff, we havn't had allot about love lately and i agree that true love doen't seem to exist as much any more. it is a good poem to me...
Totaly agree. A topic not often chosen because it is a bit of a don't go there topic. But you did a great job.
Same here! Awsome! ^_^ [/b] lol Same here Awsome stuff. Keep it up
UMMMM, you :blush: lol :hugz: would you rather be kool or cool.
Liar. [/b] The white button is my GOD. Bow down to the all mighty white button. LOL
yer i think it would reck it, i need some mysterious name. LOL umm. yer im still stumped for the moment but we'll see.
agree ^_^ ;) [/b] thanks
yer once i had written the first verse i realised the first line was from home, i thought about changing it but it was unintentional so i left it.
Yer i totaly agree about the animal thing (couldnt be bothared editing the quote to just include that part) animals are often mistreated. i could...
I'm christian but science has been pretty accurate lately and i addapt my beliefs to fit in with science as i greatly believe in both. I am also...
Ok here is a very wierd poem that is like a story, it is very wierd, and not like my normal work, be prepared for this poem, i dont know what sort...
love, would you rather be a vegetarian or die. LOL
happy birthday elemynt and Matya HAve a great day
Thanks, i wasn't sure about the reaction of this poem, as i see the darkness of the world much easyer than what i have written about. so i'm back...
Nice one, good topic, great start. Keep writing
OK, wiered but cool. Nice twist at the end. Didn't see that comming. Great stuff. Keep writing.
i dont think i have any but better to check.
This is like a think before you think line put into a poem :lol: lol. Very interesting, really good. It had my brain boggled for a minute.
Damn, if i could write stories like that i would so be acing English write now. Absolutely amazing work. We havnt had a story here for a while so...