Same here. ;) Keep on going! ^_^ [/b] Yer, great stuff. Keep going
Yer. I agree with all of them. Amazing work
Thanks, your comments are much apriciated
Yer great stuff. different form what we've been getting lately. Good stuff. Keep POSTING. ;)
dont know how good i am at positive poems, although this still talks about darkness. but anyway. here we go. please give me your thoughts. if you...
Great stuff. if you record a demo i want to hear it. THIS IS AMAZING. i can only imagine what it would sound like to music. Keep up the good stuff.
hey good job. I like it. I'm not a big fan of the one word lines so that's what made me feel that this poem wasn't as good as your previous but i...
not a fan of short poems but this poem ROCKS. It's a unique talent to be able to describe so much in so few words. TERRIFIC work. Keep it up!
thanks for adding me to your sig
Awsome poem. I could feel the power from this poem. this is a way we all feel. (if im write in what i believe the meaning of the poem to be). That...
nice i like it. Very powerful stuff. a poem about suicide is especially powerful. and i believe that is what it happening. i LOVE the meanig...
ok my version, a bit rough cause i just finished it, but here we go The darkness is the place That I call home, Still and peaceful No one can...
This was very good. I felt that the 3rd verse was a bit abrupt. this is because you went from how much you love the darkness. into all of a sudden...
i think u meant avatar.. lol i like it!! this one is really nice ^_^ ^_^ [/b] same thing :whistle: i cant spell, get over it lol
Nice, the flow was good, and the no rhyming was really good ;) . I felt the lines where a little short. i like to at least see 4 words per line...
Something has been taken From deep inside of me A secret I've kept locked away No one can ever see Linkin park - easyer to run
Av:8/10 simple, clean cut. i like it. Sig:5/10 bit blurry and dotty. could be better
same here!! ^_^ [/b] LOL, Your all adicts. RUN lol :lol: Thanks.
definently this is REALLY REALLY GOOD, im speachless. THIS IS AWSOME ;) ummmmm keep writting cause i want to hear more. GREAT STUFF.
That was pretty funny. good stuff for finding that.