HEY, dont forget to read the rules cause we dont want you (0ne of the few people who write in writters cove) to be banned. Have a great time at LPA
What is wrong with this game. I cant win. there must be a way grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr :blink: :rasberry: i give up :surrender:
Thanks, these are very kind words. That pen will be available when i start D_A_V_I_D Underground. LOL. Hope to start anotherone soon.
Yeah I know,and that is the reason why I requested a few more comments,cause the way this thread has evolved with this sucks in the beginning to...
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if your only drawing these when you're boared you better start getting board more often
nobodies listening lp - nobodies listening
ummmmmmm, I'd go with the first one. Would you rather be a mike impersonator.(and be a damn good one) or get one chance to meet him?
short but nice. Keep up the good work. i think there are a few errors in the writing of it so check that out. Good job.
I love this poem. It may be rough but you can feel the emotion. It feels real not something you just wrote. but the words that were in your heart....
i think this one is better as well. And if you wrote it when you where mad then you can more easily get those emotions on paper. just when you...
I liked this poem. I've started to write like you too. just pooring everything out. and it can leed to a good result. as you have shown us....
yeah, i agree totally. i was just saying it was a coincidence or something, but now that you mention it, imagine the writers cove without "hate"...
Yer i know. But i mean, when you look at how many people are abbused, homeless, how much domestic violence, how we discriminate people. Look at...
the flow was good, you didnt add useless stuff to your poem and you were aware of what you were doing. i never got lost or never found it...
WOW, this is really great. You are extremely talented. I loved this poem, i'm just speachless. Great job!
Thanks :D
I Missed Dinner :'(
Ok. lol. thanks. just clearing up your meaning. i appriciate your comments
What do you mean. there isn't even that much rhyming in here. also rhyming isn't everything and isn't the most important part of a poem. Some of...