wez alllllll r M8 (^my attempt at dumbness)
lol *gets up and kills 'In The Shadows' shadow in a fit of rage, later wondering how that was possible*
hey i tried the freeform poetry thing. complete faliure. so im writing a new poem. TO my usuall style :lol: and then make try to make a freeform...
ummm mine ended in 'u' but anway left in the wake of the mistake, slow to react lp papercut
lying my way from you lp lying form you
u had to end in a k didnt u. know you can choose to lose the part in your heart part of me/lp sort of in the middle of a phrase but oh well. i...
bloody nose, would you rather be me or some other guy
they always taste better when they're warm, but coke is betta then sprite
Yes every little comment helps. but a comment then pointing out what is good and bad is alot more help
thanks. all of you i will now b off to start my freeform poem, wish me luck
O.K. ill give the free form a shot. Don't know how it will turn out. I'm pretty stuck in poems that follow patterns. so ill give it a try. But it...
O.k. ive killed the repition. so se how you like it now. also i need some tips. How do you write freeform. and where did you loose the flow so i...
I likey ;)
Eternal Night I’m lost in this place, Taken over by despair, All I wanted was to run, But now I’m lost in here, This use to be a place, Where I...
ok, i see what you meen, i always get criticism about that seem so cool in my head because i hear a tune to it. so do what you want. BUT I WOULD...
Linkin Park-P5hng Me A*wy Everything falls apart Even the people who never froun eventually break down
Ashton Kutcher would you rather eat nothing for a weak, or eat untill your sick,(and possibly explode) for a week.
I eant pankakes with peanutbutter and mapel syrip. IT IS THE BEST. everyone must try it. cause it rules. (Penut butter is the best thing man ever...
That was pretty good. I didnt like the bit in the last verse when there was only 2 word for about 5 lines. Your First verse is definently your...
Ok what are the wierdest thins you eat. well i eat penutbutter and vegemite sandwitches on a regular often der good. (Austrlaians will know aobut...