how did u find this one. it's old as. i posted it ages ago. and then left for a while
thanks, but what do u think of the whole thing
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This is a song that i made up in my head, so i hope it still sounds good to all fo you who read it. this has been slightly edited, but i like it...
;) i agree. Great work, man! :D [/b] i double agree. Awsome poem
thanks guys. most of my poems are a bit more like songs in the fact i like to have a chorus, tanks for the critisism. most people just say "oh its...
YAY someone who agrees you must get there whole album b4 u can fully judge them, and in australia i hate everything about u was the only song...
can someone tell me y i cant register for them, it says registration has been locked or something.
3 days grace rock and anyone who likes linkin park will most proply like 3 days grace. dont forget buy the 3 days grace album. BECAUSE IT ROCKS....
THE PLAGUE I look around, And see a plague that covers the earth I look around, And see the destructions it’s caused, I look around, And see what...
NICE ^_^ I just LOVE the last line. it really makes u feel the pain and regret of what the person has done. i felt that the lind ending in...
Another outstanding poem, but i do agree that it feels in some parts u are trying a bit to hard to rhyme. i do that to all the time, just try to...
kool thanks, i thought so too. a bit off topic but what is with th buffalo thing around here. and what do u think of my sig pic. Thanks again...
Weird but good. quite original sort of formatt. i liked it. dont know about anyone else but even though i didnt think it was the best poem since...
i know it's some sort of personal joke that everyone thinks is funny and great without even knowing what's going on. and the poem itself isnt...
really good. only being new to this poem writting thing im stuck on rhyming poems. But u have managed to pull of a great poem. i'm not sure what...
NICE ^_^ thats good. about how most of us feel at one point.
I mean it has the basic plot outline message of my poem, just the words you use are more modern day speak, more like that of a rock song than a...
thanks this is probly only the 4th poem i've ever wrote, thats why it is still fairly basic. thanks for ur positive comments. and whats with "...
I look around and wonder, If the whole world has gone mad, So many people dying, From a plague everyone has had, This plague doesn’t attack the...