I'll post later on in the game because I am knee deep in the game Our shit may be the same, but my shits insane Stuck in a Cage? You must not of...
This is a R.A.P battle? Bitches I travel all around the world gathering cattle together Abra Kadvara I arrived here in the writer cove, back...
Very weird, you commented in my topic at the same hour and minute I commented in your topic. :o
I told you. You are becoming better with every poem you release. Keep it up, this really means much to see someone improve themselves in something...
arT saveS, YOU ARE NOW DEEMED POETIC PRESIDENT OF WRITERS COVE. Now may you have a nice day Mr/Mrs President.
I hate I, only I don’t know why, I despise everybody else but you I look over my shoulders at the huge boulder, It’s riding in the back of my head...
I was thinking the same thing. B)
:o saunderitos you better make a come back, because this guy just dissed not only your rap. He made fun of it, and you. This is a slap in the...
I feel like this came together well. I am just working on my raps right now, and I am feeling them. B) No wonder you cant sleep in hell, cause...
I liked it. Sometimes shorter is better, because the longer you try to make it the more you begin to force words. B)
Trash talk rap is great, especially against G-Unit. They are just dumb, their clothes are dumb, and everything about them is dumb. B)
Don't do the hate. If he did not realize his rythem was the same, who cares? The poem was nice, now move on.
I like it because you were talking trash on 50. Please finish of this rap by talking crap on the rest of G-Unit. I hate them. B)
Oh well, I will try again. Oh, and yes it does feel like a slap in the face. I do understand that other people will have different opinions, he...
So...like...is it good? I know it's long, but is it good?
Bro, it does kind of go with American Idiots beat. Weird huh. Its ok though.
It seems your writing has taken leaps and bounds evertime you post. k have a great night. B)
"I’m left with one eye After fighting politics Seeing the world go by And killing my critics" The opening is gold. I was drawn in right from...
I had so much fun with this one. The other rap I tried was just...wack, so I tried something else. Thanks for the reviews. I want more though :(
saunderitos see my new rap, I had so much fun this time.