I accidently double posted, sorry.
I liked that you actually went to succeed in something you never tried. Just continue and ryhme, and in time your chimes will fly.
Posted: Sep 13 2005, 06:06 AM I'm Not Obsessed!!! its quite good for your first attempt i must say, However it felt a little long ,and you...
I like it. It seems very you, and unabused.
My last post had me confused and un amused. I was kind of let down and not proud of what I had posted. Now I hope this one is worth it. Look...
Your version is HoT! I will continue working on mine. B)
Help me out with this, I still don't like it. It's making me feel sick.
I am currently working on it. I keep looking at it and changing things in and out to get it to work perfectly.
Coming here with something new Making rhymes straight out of the blue Trying to create something that will grab you I don’t know what else I could...
Powerful, I felt this poem. I think there were some spelling errors, but its still cool. B)
B) Everywhere I look inside Listening to your every cry Everywhere I look and stare Straight into your eyes Looking around I am smiling down,...
Heh, AWESOME!! B)
Nice I am feeling it. Your poems are great. Are you going to enter the tourny, if they can put it together? B)
Your poem Outsider, the one about rape actualy gave me the idea for this. You know stalkers are usualy the type of people who rape. B)