It's terrible, the city is probably going to be completely ruined...and it's a beautiful place for those of you who haven't seen it. Last I heard...
I always like reading your work, this one being no exception. Keep 'em coming.
It's pretty good...I love the idea. And your rhymes don't jar, they fit quite nicely...that's a rarity. However, there's a few lines that are...
Good one, Anya.
Tool is not "old skool". Learn to spell, and please don't ever say that Maynard is hot again. In any case, I love Tool. AEnima is an amazing...
Before this thread dies... I present to you, Dan, in a tree, running from the DNR and Minneapolis police. [img]
I care... :hugz:
I'm nulling my vote. I don't believe in a loving, caring God. If there is a higher being, it's just letting us do whatever, and possibly looking...
Contrary to sickcycle, I think the rhyme scheme suited this particular topic well. It flowed nicely. Good work.
I'm working on the next part...I may just post it in this thread. Thanks for the feedback though, encouragement is always nice.
Flogging Molly at Irish Fair. That's all.
Sig - 10/10. Anything that makes me laugh gets that automatically.