I wake up each and every day Knowing I’m closer to when you’ll go away And I try to sleep each and every night Consumed by the promise of your...
I am a bit confused about your mindset. You say you want to be let go, but you say you don't want to be neglected. You strive to stand on your...
That's great man. Hope things straighten out. Did he just meet her? If so, it could be just an initial infatuation and die down. Just be open...
That sucks man. Like the situation, not the poem. I wish you the best of luck.
Not bad. The topic doesn't hit home to me as much as some of your other stuff, but it isn't a bad piece. A couple rhymes seemed forced, but...
Good job. I liked the lure bit, it was clever.
I tell you I love you That you’re not like other girls And you smile the prettiest smile With teeth as white as pearls And I say I’ll always...
Take my hand and I’ll guide you through this grey winter scene Of snowflakes and ashes drifting across a lonely winter dream Of dying last words...
That's a pretty cool story. Good job.
I drown you in my apologies Asking you about all of my inabilities Emphasizing my weakest capabilities From unconfidence to a lack of...
The second link is broken. EDIT: I think this is it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tjyb9HwYy_Q
lol at spheres having corners. On a more serious note, I really miss my girlfriend Jen. It has only been a few days since I last saw her, but I...
Angelic return of resplendence The recourse to slow decadence Draped in the whitest illumination Glowing, dismissing contamination...
That's really good. I love the whole thing. Great job.
A searing light Effortlessly slicing through the dark clouds of loneliness Dissipating feelings of inadequacy Emphasizing all I was worth Only...
I liked it, sad though. I would hate it if anyone felt like that in a relationship with me... It is good you told her, if this poem has any...
Maybe the second line there should be: "You realize help is anywhere but here". It's up to you though... Now watch her smile as you sink A single...
But soon you come to crave this pain A blistering pleasure replacing your old distain Who you once were is an echo from long ago Collapse into...
A carrot of hope to string us along Our heart dances to the beat of another's song We struggle to be free of her deadly embrace As we kiss the...
She took away all the pain I never knew I felt She showed me a fate I never knew I was dealt I looked into her eyes as she watched me melt...