I liked the emotion in this one. I, personally, think using words like "pissed", "hog" and "dumb" take away from the poetic feel a bit. Just my...
It isn't too bad. Better than the exclamation mark poem for sure. I can't really relate to it, but it has a nice ring to it.
The 20th verse? What? And yes I write everything I post. I would never take credit for another's work.
No, I didn't know the word at all. It wasn't because it was spelt wrong, I just hadn't heard it before. I was trying to tell you that you were...
No it didn't. If you want people to know you should add it to your profile. Like, I have no problem with you telling me. I just mean, for future...
Not bad. I'm not a huge fan of them but I liked this song.
Honestly the only reason I knew you spelt it wrong was because I had no clue what it meant and I searched it up on dictionary.com.
I'm sorry, but the rhyming seems kind of poor. The message seems quite clear, I don't know how anyone could have thought you shot someone OTHER...
Okay. I was really thanking Frontman C and Mali in that thanks, as I already thanked you above. That is why I corrected myself with Mali. Thanks...
I love you for the feedback. However, try to to necropost or you'll get in trouble.
Okay. Thanks. Is Maranwë from anything, or did you just make it up?
Okay lol. Do you mind if I still call you Mali? That's what I know you by more. Plus, it's easier to remember lol. torn rose was cool as well, but...
Thanks guys. EDIT: Well, guys and girls. Sorry Mali.
Thanks for the compliment. And sure you can call me Ross, or esaul17. Either work.
Thanks lol.
My heart would be prettier if it wasn’t broken My world clearer without tears in my eyes My smile would be wider if there was truth behind it...
Can someone post a link to Mark's band's myspace?
Not bad. to me it lacked something to make it stand out and be special, but it was wtill good. On a side note Bullet for my Valentine are...
I realize they are related. Love in itself is weightless though.
Why is everyone so hard on Luke and the Planets CD? I thought he made far beter lyrics than Mark, and that the band upped their instrumental game...