No problem. It really did seem to just have a personal feel to it. I can't say why exactly, but the whole thing just didn't seem like it could be...
Never heard the song you mentioned, but I liked the poem (or lyrics). EDIT: And I think the length was perfect.
Really nice. Loved the rhyming. Wasn't so forced and flowed great.
Nice. Not sure what else to say.
Great job. Sounds really personal.
Tommorrow. I would laugh so hard.
New LP email. Here it is. What's up Linkin Park Fans. I know it's been a long time since we've had a chance to see you guys face to face. I...
Conservatives won the bloody election. I am ticked.
Whatever happened to Will? Did he just want to leave staff because he no longer likes LP?
Not bad. I think the biggest thing you have to overcome in your poems is the forced rhyming. No offence, it just seems present in all your stuff....
Running from time maybe? Plus, it could be that you feel you are being "played". Manipulated by someone or just that everythign you do is already...
Not bad. You commented on all my stuff, so I thought I owed you one back. It had a few rough edges (you rhymed Focus with focus), it wasn't bad. I...
Thanks a lot. Stupid typos, thanks for pointing it out.
Silent Eyes The sun pierces my blinds to illuminate my empty bed Maybe if you were beside me I wouldn’t feel so dead You’re the first thing in my...
Why am I dead? What makes you so important? Perhaps I’ll never know But still I wish to follow you Wherever you may go And I may not be...
By any chace is there a girl that you like that is ignoring you? It could mean that because she can't here you due to the headphones. They could...
Matrix quote? lol. I don't really think you'd die, but it seems you always wake up before death in your dreams. You mind is powerful though, if it...
That is good.
I read them all and liked them. Self-destructive lover is my favourite.
Whoops, I guess I should have done a search first, sorry.