Thanks. I updated it.
Bought? That would be Meteora. If you don't know the artist, you need to get off this site.
#1 Some of it is good, but other line's are horribly forced IMO. #2 Definately better. I don't get your last line though, what is it saying?...
I don't want it to become too instrument based. I like LP's style of instruments supposrting vocals, I find long guitar solos and such boring....
Kenshin (especially the first set of OVAs), Berserk (Griffith pwns), Scrapped Princess, Gankutsuou (Great Story), FF7: Advent Children (if you...
Don't worry, I'm obviously the exception (that or the only one to speak what they really feel).
Good job, flowed nicely. That last line reminded me of soemthing I wanted to write about a year ago, but I losy my completed verse and dropped it....
Don't know her or care about her.
Is this legal?
Amen to that. Unfortunately I have to go to my Uncles for Christmas Eve. I hate family gathering.
Did Mike write all the lyrics or just the stuff he sang?
Flow seemed to suffer a bit, but I liked a lot of the rhymes.
Snowflake A snowflake falls from the sky Like a gift from up high The ashes of a heavenly cremation The dust of angels blanket a nation Every...
Odd. I got a warning too. Sorry for that, it was my fault. I misunderstood you.
Science pwns art (or more art pwns me). Personal preferance though.
Thanks. I like the new line more too. Thanks for the suggestion.
Thanks. And your talent easily surpasses mine.
Sorry that this is so late, but you commented on a lot of my poems so I didn't want to let this one slip by. I really liked it. Although a few...
I liked it, especially the ending. It had a few rough edges, but all in all a good effort and it paid off. If I had to find a weakness, I would...
Well, it isn't bad. It is an okay foundation, but could use A LOT of polish.