Pretty cool. Would probably seem better with music, but it still came across quite well. Congrads.
Thanks. And you mean to say this isn't my best, right heshboy?
I liked it. Sorry I can't point out what was good and bad, the whole thing was good. Great job.
Hey, don't get me worng, this is a good piece. Beats my stuff.
Am I the only one who thinks she looks like Avril Lavigne?
I like it. Albeit a tad repetative (imo), I think it went really well. And can one poem really ever be worthy of the title 'Heart'?
Whops, wrong topic about the line change. Sorry lol.
Thanks. Yeah, I was trying a new style. Also, I really wanted to write a poem of this nature, but was having a hard time. I chose this style...
Thanks a lot. Love the feedback. Did you think the line I changed was an improvement?
December comes, the one and only Time to celebrate that I’m lonely Twenty-first day, year seventeen Gazing out at the grey winter scene Another...
I like it. I think there is a typo in this line though.
Okay, thanks. I'll try to change it. EDIT: I changes it to: Am I crushed to dust and brushed away? How it that?
Lol, good point, good point. Althouhg, if it is like Mike's album, there won't we an overly large advertising campaign. Thanks though, I guess...
Okay thank you. Did Mike admit these were prewritten, or is it just assumed?
Well, you never know how long it has been done for. If they have the copies printed and all is two weeks that long to ship them?
Oh lol. Is the DJ Vice freestyle copyrighted or can I ask for the video here? Also, do you know if the DJ Vice Freestyle was an actual freestyle?
Staring up at the ceiling, numb with feeling Just me and the music I’m stealing And it’s hard concealing that I long for you But I can’t follow...
Wow, a video. I only have the one verse (Behind closed curtain I don't even exist is in it). Is it banned to give me a link to the video.
Wow, confusion. Thanks for clearing that all up.
Was that freestyling or was it pre-planned?