I like. Keep it up.
Good. I like this bit *points to quote*
Pretty good.
Pretty good. I can hear it as a song... And for the line needs changing bit... Here's some possibilities. Air so thick you can't exhale. Inhale...
Well, your work is pretty good, but you'd do better to actually post your poems on the site, not links. Then you'll get comments.
Beautiful. I love this.
Pretty good, I like.
I'd never heard of him before now, but bloody hell, he sounds more like a terrorist than anyone he describes. Bah.
This is good, but you've made a few spelling mistakes. Grr, it seems that all the comments I make remark on the spelling of the writers. Bugger....
Fried Rice.
This is good, me likes. Keep it up.
I'd rather lie. Being truthful is dangerous. Would you rather rescue lots of people during a natural disaster, and end up disabled, or would you...
I agree with everyone, this is really, really good.
All right, I'm here to point out the errors... About them, I'm not sure.. Maybe you meant it to be that way. There was exactly four born this...
Lucky her. I agree, this is good. ^_^ And... you spelt dedicated wrong.
Great work you two. And I support the Double Dave and Flame-Dave Connections :lol:
I really like this... It doesn't have to rhyme to sound good. It'd be great to hear to music.
I love this. It reminds me of Highlander... And I wanted to mention that there are a few spelling errors in the poem... But never mind, this is...
Pretty good. I like the first verse. Keep it up.
Happy Birthday Birthday BuriedxTragedy! Hope I'm not too late... And have a great day.. or night... anyway, have a great 24 hours!