Exactly what I was thinking. I really like this. Your short poems are great ^_^ There's no way I'll ever be this good.
Thanks again for posting here as well. ^_^ I'm just happy the evil one that posted on Shut Up and dissed everyone didn't reply here. To whoever...
Thanks! I don't know if you've posted on the first version on this, but thanks for posting on this version ^_^ . IT'S -note the use of it- been...
Tea flavored water. :mellow:
I agree completely. He was dissing everyone on some other topics. Head isn't screwed on tight enough. Thanks :P I usually have titles related to...
There are days when you can’t seem to bring the knife to your wrist There are days when you still your breathing afraid that someone might hear...
-cheesy smile- thank you for your comments piss off. there's no need for rants.
Shut up I know what you're thinking when you look at me Like that Shut up I know what you're saying when you talk to me Like that Why do you not...
True. This is bleeding awesome. I love it. -bows down- This is so bloody powerful...-thinks better and gets back up-
Wow. Bleeding amazing. I'm twelve and I write pathetic stuff...I can't imagine even being able to write poems like that in less than 5...
I like it. But length is of the necessary :P . and that sounds wrong...lol....if you make it longer...then yayness. I'm still writing my new...
this is rly gd. i really like it. keep going...
Thank you
I like it. It's short, and direct. I do think that your other works are better, but this is amazing in its own way...keep it up! ;)
Wow! This is amazing!! I agree with anyone who has praise for this, it's bloody amazing! Better than I can ever write :mellow: , keep it up!
Thank you all!!! I'm thinking about adding a few more lines to it now, but if any of you have any ideas or suggestions of events or actual...
Thank you all!
i agree wit razan, By Myself and With You.. ^_^
Trapped in a state of constant confusion Embracing the insanity the beckons To me Wrapped in a warm cocoon of lies Not understanding what went...
Have you ever? Listened to your friends talking about you for hours on end, wanting to do nothing more than scream, “I can fucking hear you,”...