Nice, Pygu, lmao. I know, your tunes are always really good, I mean, you're the one that found most of the tunes for my songs ... Keep it up!...
I really like it. I think it's true, and we do need to try harder. I really like this one...It's one of my favorites. :D -stares in adoration-
Wow. Its good, personal experience? :shifty:
Thanks you guys, for now I'll leave it as shut up. Trapped is an option, however.
How about .. Hold on, almost there Linkin Park Presents Park Linkin
Nice. It's very ... powerful, hell, it's commanding lol. And I REFUSE to say anything bad about this. -smirks- I had to put that in. It was really...
I like it. Lol. I think it's really good. Um, nothing else to say. Keep it up! ^_^
Doing good. You're improving greatly in a short space of time :P. I really like your poems, the others weren't freaky, just misunderstood.
Shut up I know what you're thinking when you look at me Like that Shut up I know what you're saying when you talk to me Like that Why do you not...
Thanks, I've been having trouble writing LPA worthy poems, so it's nice to be appreciated.
I love it. That's it. I really like it. Keep it up!!
lmao. lol, this is really original ... i love it!!
She liked life up high Too strong to go slow Too young too die Wasn't going to give up Clutched at life with smooth claws Till the last silver...
It's really good, but you need to work on the rhyme scheme. I'm feeling the poem, it's beautiful, really powerful.
Thank you all. Faajpe, thanks for the constructive criticism, can you tell me which ones you didn't like, and I can work on them. Cheers.
Where did she go? She’s not gone anywhere It seems her heart has run away It doesn’t matter if they stare All of her memories Buried in her mind...
I love it! It's great!!! I like it, and I think the flow was good, too. I really like your style, please write more. ^_^ :P
'm from British Guyana, in South America ... prettymuch a nowhere place, and for ppl who don't understand, you can just say i'm English or...
Wow. I love this, especially the chorus, "Her face is haunting in my mind She never leaves my thoughts We will meet in my dreams In my dreams she...
It was his first day The third day to death New and young He had nothing left Walked in with nothing Walked out empty Leaving all hopes behind...