Hey! This is tight. Really good, keep it up best friend o' mine. :D
Wow. This is really powerful. I love it! The last end, 'A lie I wish I'd never bought.' It's my favorite part, please keep writing! :D
Wow, this is really emotional and powerful. I love the last verse, and I agree, you should call it 'All Because'. .. Yeah, 'm the person that you...
Thank you, and good idea LPFreak.
Thank you for all your comments.
Spoken fears can come true, we all live, we all die, that does not begin to justify you. I Must Be Dreaming- Evanescence
A Second Cup Tiamo .... and a couple of hours ago I had a Frappucino. Ahh, heaven. :P
Thanks, Razan. It means a lot.
Beautiful! Lol, I love the emotions in this, it's great! The end was ...surprising...but I really liked it. Please continue writing! :D
If I'd said those words Would you have stayed? If I'd begged in a million ways Would you still be here? It was too late By the time I'd found out...
wow, I love this. It's really heartfelt, and emotional. I think this is a great piece, keep it up. :D
:P Err, 'm not too good with the speeches, but methinks that this is bloody brilliant! It's great, the emotions, the way you rhymed, though it was...
Thanks a lot, all of you.
Wow. It's really heartfelt, I really like this. I wish I was able to write something like this, but I haven't been on this earth long enough lol....
Wow. This is a really, well, sad, as in, -sob, pout-, not bad ... I really like this poem. You have incredible talent. And, no, I really can't...
All your love is now Forgotten All your sweetness has gone Rotten Believe me not I hope you rot I loved you but now I'm Forgotten You killed me...
Thanks. And, no, I haven't been writing for very long.
There's only one choice The forgotten have One more voice Asking one more dance One place to run to One place that is safe One place to turn to...
Sorry about not tellin' you I thought you always knew I didn't want to leave at the start But it was always about you Sorry about not tellin' you...
You sit there You're watching me Are you blind? Can't you see? Don't want you here It always hurts I'm all alone, left in The dirt Why do you try...