exacly the same as in 'in the end'.. just the same melody.. i think.. :P [/b] lol, i can see the exct same melody being applied to that lol. i...
I must say i think you can do better than this, it lacked originality and didn't really draw me into it at all. I know you can do better, just...
It had an entrancing power to it which i really liked. It was short simple but very effective. Good work.
I've got a personal grudge against iTunes, nething else :whistle:
I've been using nero to burn music albums, but i've just realised that it doesn't keep the tags, so when i go to play it on my computer, you don't...
I wasn't really refering to breaking benjamin songs in particular. Just what came to mind first. I love both breaking benjamin albums, though i...
I don't know, i have to agree with you that it isn't great. It just seems a bit crude and in some bits beautiful, i think it could be good if it...
some of their best songs, though i don't mind their softer ones as well, but all my favourites are in that list, i really can't wait for this. I'm...
Great work, it was simple but suprisingly good and very catchy, really draws the reader in. This is the first i've read from you and i'm liking...
I'd really like to know of some more soft rock bands that are more melodic. Like Breaking Benjamin. I've got a lot of heavy metal. But softer...
It's constructive critacism, if you want to be good, you have to take it on the chin, and try to improve yourself.
OK, I don't want to come across as really harsh but here is what i think. I've got nothing against long poems, but this get's, hmmm i'm sorry i...
I don't mind swearing in a poem, but in this it was very unessecary. First of all, i found the rhymes to be a bit too much. They weren't constant,...
i want to be at the Arsenal game... :( ARSENAL <3 it's wednesday....another week...i'm waiting to read all that poetry...wanna know how badly i...
Stretching the date!!!! I stayed up to 1 in the morning so i could get it done!!!! Awwwwww, i wish i knew earlier so i could of polished it off a...
Great job freakolp, like always. I agree with tornrose, i think the first 4 and last 8 were the best lines of the poem. They were soft yet...
I've been really busy and havn't been around but come back to find this. :D I'm super exited. Entering soon. Lucky i checked this out, the comps...
Totally Awsome......... Flowed so well and had such great depth to it, awsome write.
Ace work ;) This bit was my favourite though Awsome work, i really liked it.
I agree, awsome write, keep it up.