Quite good, there was the odd place it lost it's flow, but not too often but the thing that annoys me the most is that it doesn't seem to fully...
thanks chemist, i decoded the first couple but i was feeling to lazy this time.
Something new, a weird sort of lay our but i like it. Hope you like it too. My Child Little child, Come into my arms, Let me abuse you, And do...
Wow, i really really like this. It was so powerful and just breathtaking... AMAZING (w00t) . Great job, love to see more, i'm left speachless....
Really good overall, i felt the end of the 1st and 2nd stanzas lost their flow a bit but other than that it's quite good, not your best, but still...
I have to agree, i havn't seen anything completely amazing by you but your writing has been quite good, but this i have to say it was a flop, it...
I feel sorry for the guy as well, though he didn't have to throw his life away. Anyway, back to the song, quite good, i found 1 or 2 spots where...
Nice job, some lines seemed a bit too long and messed with the flow a bit, but overall it was quite good. Your writing style i like but this piece...
I read the original thinking hmmm, it's ok, but the re-write is much better. Some problems with flow i found in the original were fixed up and the...
Oh yer, probly should of mentioned what styles i'm into, lol. Well anything in the rock and metal genres are usually good. Already listen to lost...
A likely story. Same here, i just have no proof and always cleaned it off after i was finished doing it. And now i can't be bothard and when i...
O.K. I'm desperate for some more music, i've listened to all the stuff i've got, and listened to it again, and again, so i need something new, i'm...
I agree, it was da shit, keep it up.
This poem is so amazing, everything you write is amzing, soon i wont bother reading them i'll just be like, hmm freakolp, ok we know that's gonna...
wow, just brilliant, you are an amazing writer. I really felt sorry for the person in the poem. Just a great job at getting the reader to feel how...
I quite liked it. It was very visual, you did a great job with imagery. The setup of it is unusual but it seemed to work quite well. The flow was...
Welcome to both of you, have lots of fun, make sure you read the rules so you don't get banned, now that's something you can be paranoid about.
Pretty good, didn't flow as well as it could in some sposts, but that isn't too much to worry about, there was a good message in the poem. Overall...
Sounds interesting, plus i must know what the hell 667 is!!!!!!!!!!! We don't get many stories around here, so it was good to read something...
Thanks fallen angel and thankyou silent sound. I appriciate everyones comments, good or bad. (though none of you actually gave me bad comments.)...