Hello, welcome to the forums, have fun (But you should already know that seeing as only 3 people havn't told you to have fun). But also make sure...
Pretty good for a first song, you seem to have some talent and i believe you will only get better the more you write, so keep writing.
Hello fellow poets, finally got something new for you all. It is a bit different but i hope you still all like it. (Oh and it's quite long) EDIT:...
I must agree, for something so simple i'm just like "WOW". I'm not sure what makes this poem so appealing but i really, really like it. The flow...
Nice, not your best, but you've written so many completely amazing poems i hardly expect you to best yourself each time. Not much to comment...
Great work, i havn't read much, like arT saveS but i also agree that this is really interesting and that you are a talented writer. Hope ot see...
I must say i liked this better than your last, but this one is much simpler. Is this going to be a song? cause if it is, it seems a bit short. But...
I also agree but both were great. The only thing i didn't like were some sentances didn't seem to follow the mood of the poem, though they were...
if you think the line sucked, i recomend you replace it, not remove it. Also I see how you were trying to use repetition to get your point...
I actually really liked it, it was short but it concluded nicely and protrayed the meaning i think you were trying to get across. I lIKE IT. ;)
i must agree that this is amazing poem, i also love this bit. It's just brilliant, keep it up.
GREAT, I havn't been posting for a while (been way to busy) and i can see you have really developed, this is amazing work. About the second part,...
It was pretty good, i found the rhyming a bit forced and took away from the poem, also i think it flowed too well (if thath makes any sense). It...
i found out what was wrong after much searching. When i plugged in my ipod and tried to use the restore on the updater it came up with an error....
See, this is my problem, there seems to be no way to reformat it without using the updater thing. There is one other way, when you first install...
Ok, to cut a long story short i need to reformat my ipod, can i do this by just clicking properties and formatting it as FAT32. Or is there some...
That he was ripping off you, but now i think about it, mabye your ripping Dedicated off. Hmmm :hmm:
Your last couple of songs/poems have been pretty good, but this one is much better, i really like it. Sounds good. Keep it up. B)
AMAZING, but what's new, keep it up ;)
This albums gonna be CRAZY, i can't wait to get it. I don't think there is going to be any restriction in creativity here. Can't wait to get it....